Yuki Hana(Finished)

Subject: Yuki Hana(Finished) Wed Jul 24, 2013 8:04 pm

Yuki Hana
Tell me that I'm what you despise most in this world.... Because, I know that I'm not worth your time...

THE ENTRANCE
"'To announce your name and rank' is a custom taught to us when we learn how to fight."

Full Name: Yuki Hana
Age: 174
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Rouge(or n/a)
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Appearance: She stands at an small 5ft 2in & weighs in at an light 86lbs. Her outfit is an odd color scheme for an arrancar, but she doesn't seem to care much. She keeps most of it tied down with dark blue ribbons around her waist, arms & wrists. She also keeps most of her hair up in the same ribbon, except thinner & longer. Thick bangs drop just above her eyes, although Yuki keeps them pushed aside most of the time. Her long hair falls down to her lower back with an light blue color. Yuki's eyes are a beautiful emerald green color, although they almost always stay looking to the ground. Her hollow hole hides at the center of her chest, in between her breasts. She keeps her Zanpaktou on her left side on her body, only useing it when she really needs to.

THE PERSONA
"Don't use such strong words. It makes you seem weak."

Personality: Usually an very quiet girl who likes to keep to herself anytime & all of the time. Yuki is afraid that if she were to talk to anyone that she would become too easily attached to them; so therefore never talks to anyone. She usually keeps away from other arrancars because she thinks that almost all of them just want to kill & get stronger. Yuki keeps her head down most of the time she is around other people; avoiding eye contact with anyone.
Likes:

One: The human world
Two: Sweets(Preferably pocky)
Three: Reading
Four: Singing
Five: Visiting the human world

Dislikes:

One: Losing someone she loves
Two: Fighting
Three: Never being able to visit the human world again.
Four: Being insulted
Five: Being around other people.
Six: Rude People
Seven: Hueco Mundo
Eight: The sun
Nine: Violence

THE INVENTORY
"The curtain that falls down at the end, shall be pulled down by the blade of my sword."

Resurrección Name & Description:
Name: Shin no zetsubō(真の絶望)
Information Yuki will begin to look) somewhat like an fox; her hair will turn an orange color and she will quickly grow long fox ears, tail, etc. Her eyes will also turn from their natural color of emerald green to an orange red. She will begin to lose control of herself, & going against her natural instinct will run into an fight without thinking about it. Yuki will barely be able to feel pain, & will become more excited when she does. Although when she falls out of Resurrección, she will not be able to recall who she hurt and/or killed.

Abilities:
Name: Omajji(損なわ)
Description: The Omajji is an plant that feeds on the user's spiritual pressure, in turn; gets bigger & bigger with as much spiritual pressure it eats. The Omajji's saliva can melt through any material, even steel. It can also sense the slightest of movements, even an enemy's shutter.

Zanpaktou Information
Name: Zetsubō Nai(絶望ナイ)
Looks:

Spoiler:

THE STORY
"If history repeats itself, and moves in a circular path, then believing that whatever force is turning it is perfect, is all we can do as we move ahead. Pushed along by forces beyond our control, waiting, for the blade to be swung."

History:
Age:8
"Kazuma wait up!" the girl shouted at the boy as they raced to an natural waterfall. "You're so slow Yuki!" She grunted in anger and attempted to run faster "No I'm not you meanie! I can get there before you just watch!" she looked down to the ground and tried to run as fast as she could but soon heard laughing coming from Kazuma. She looked up to see him standing on an big rock with his hands on his hips. "I told you you couldn't beat me here!" he laughed. "Yuki, feeling defeated and out of breath, finished the journey to the rock by walking and sat down to rest. "You're mean Kazuma." "And you're ugly." he came back rudely.
Finally fed up with him she stood up & pushed him into water and afterwards stood up on the rock. "Now I'm the winner." she said to him as his head came up from the water. Although Kazuma didn't waist any time to yank Yuki into the water with her. Soon they began to splash at each other, laughing and having an good time. When they got tired of this, they decided to let their clothes dry on the big rock they were fighting over and sit on opposite sides of an tree so that they can dry off. Yuki almost fell asleep into her knees before she heard Kazuma's voice. "I'm sorry." She turned her head slightly and listened. "I'm sorry I'm always so mean to you Yuki." there was an long pause, & for a long time they both could only hear the singsong of the birds in the trees. "It's ok Kazuma, for now on; I'll lead." she finally said, smiling softly as she tryed to rub away the goosebumps on her arms.

Age: 17
September 3rd
Yuki sat at an desk listening to the teacher rattling on and on about math for about an hour now. She couldn't wait until school was over. Finally after about 15 minutes the bell rang. Everyone scrambled out of the door and didn't pay any attention to the last words that the teacher had to say; most of them even left their homework, including Yuki. She slowly walked through the busy hallways, careful not to bump anyone. Kazuma was always waiting outside for her after school because he skipped his last class. Although when she stepped outside of the school, Kazuma was nowhere to be seen. "Kazuma..?"
Sia leaned against an pillar outside of the school for about 10 minutes before Kazuma ran out of the school, panting heavily. He looked around quickly before he spotted and ran to her. "Hey I'm sorry Yuk-" he barely got through the beginning of his sentience before Yuki punched him in the face, hard enough to knock him off of his feet and smash his face to the sidewalk. "Do you have any idea on how worried I was for you?" She yelled, fists to her side. He pulled his head up from the sidewalk and wiped the side of his mouth. Kazuma looked to Yuki. "Look, I'm sorry. Last class kept me late because I always skip." She turned away from him. "Whatever, just don't do it again." Kazuma stood up holding his head with one hand & his jaw with the other. "Yea, ok Yuki, let's just go." Yuki was looking to the ground as they began to take the long walk home, only to look up to Kazuma once the whole walk. "I'm sorry Kazuma. You know I was just worried for you." he looked down & smiled. "I know Yuki."

September 18
Yuki looked down at the small list of groceries that she had made, going over them again & again in her head, trying to think if she forgot anything in the store. Heavy shopping bags hung from her arms as she did so, weighing her arms down & creating dark red marks on her skinny arms. "I guess that's everything..." she mumbled softly to herself as she stuffed the paper into her jeans pocket. But as she did an did she heard an deep voice from behind her, "Don't you look like an tasty snack.." as soon as Yuki heard this voice, an chill instantly went down her spine. She slowly turned around to see an large creature, somewhat smiling to show it's sharp & gruesome teeth. Most of it's face was hidden by an odd mask. 'I can't move..' she thought, the groceries shuttering in her arms. What, you're not going to run?! Are you not going to give me a challenge, human?!"it yelled, staring holes through Yuki. Tears began to fall down her cheeks, now realizing that she was helpless. "Hmph. Weakling." it murmured as it raised it's large paw; about to strike her.
"Yuki, what's wrong? Why are you standing in the middle of the sidewalk?" a familiar voice said, enough to stop the creature from striking her. She could still barely move, but she looked at Kazuma's direction & whispered as he walked over to her. "Go away Kazuma. It's not safe here.." He looked around & laughed. "What do you mean not safe? Are you pulling an joke on me?" she pleaded with her tear-filled eyes. "Please Kazuma.." as soon as he saw her eyes the smile was wiped from his face. "Yuki, what's going on..?" The creature, who was becoming impatient, now began to move toward Kazuma. "I tired of this bull shit! I'm ready to eat!" He said as his claws swiped through Kazuma's chest, breaking several ribs.
The instant this happened, Yuki broke out of her frozen state & ran toward Kazuma, who lay in a bloody crumpled up heap on the street. "Kazuma.. wake up, please.. I have beat you up more than this before. just please.." she wrapped her arms around Kazuma tighter & sobbed until a sharp pain suddenly came to her back. "Kazuma, I'm sorry.." she muttered, resting her head on Kazuma's chest as the pain on her back began to fade; but the pain in her chest hurt immensely.

-Human history end-

RP Sample:
Yuki sat on an building in the human world, looking up at the moon. It's dim light barely lit up the rooftop but still, it felt comforting. Yuki was sure an shinigami felt her spiritual pressure by now; but she paid no mind to that. Instead she just began to hum an soft song that came into her head at that moment. Soon the soft hums began to turn into words that filled her mouth very slowly. "Come now.. open you're eyes, look to the flames in the sky. Come now.. do not forget those embers, are the final judge.."
She had to open her eyes on the count of two things; one, she began singing, which she absolutely hates. & two & shinigami finally found her. Yuki ran one hand though her long silk like hair & stood up off of her cozy spot off of the roof. "Don't move!" the shinigami shouted at her as soon as she stood up. She narrowed her eyes at him, his Zanpaktou was pointed at her; but was shaking like crazy; it must have been his first time doing this. Sia looked away from him & began to form an small Garganta; just large enough for her to fit it. She mad a small gesture to him & stepped into Hueco Mundo, away from home.

Face Claim: Song Lyrics in RP sample: Megurine Luka, Witch{Eng Dub} [ https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IJBH70Lntro ]
Image: http://www.deviantart.com/image_preview.php?i=151&u=14790919

Admin Posts : 14 Join date : 2013-07-18

Does your character have an ability?

Subject: Re: Yuki Hana(Finished) Wed Jul 24, 2013 11:24 pm

Edited.

Posts : 4 Join date : 2013-07-24

(This is izzie)

Approved!
Eric, Jor, or Geoff will give you your rank.~

Posts : 78 Join date : 2013-07-22

So an Arrancar unaffiliated with Las Noches and the Espada? I'd prefer having the organizations themselves filled before we get Rogues, but that's my personal preference.

Where it comes to your abilities, remove the two named abilities. What I'm looking for in this section is a general idea of her overall power, not her individual abilities within her power. It seems to me your character has some sort of plant-like ability, with the rose petals (which is a bit much like Byakuya's ability for my tastes) and the plant creature. However, the plant creature I'm going to have to say will be a no, as it's not an ability, but another living creature. To mechanize another creature and allow it to fight, I'd have to see an application for it and then we might could get something done.

Unless this creature is a literal part of your ability, in which case when you rewrite what you have to include what the general idea of her power, we can get something done when it comes to making your techniques in your Stats and Skills topic.

(As another note, you mention percentage of stats. Def+19% & Atk+43%; we won't be working with percentages and this isn't the place to describe what bonus your Resurreccion gives you. That will also be taken care of in the Stats and Skills topic.

Subject: Re: Yuki Hana(Finished) Thu Jul 25, 2013 1:29 am

Edited.

Posts : 78 Join date : 2013-07-22

Thank you, but I still need you to write out what the general ability is for your Resurreccion. Think more along the lines of what the concept is.

Subject: Re: Yuki Hana(Finished) Thu Jul 25, 2013 1:43 am

Edited.. It's not much of an ability.. but..

Posts : 78 Join date : 2013-07-22

I imagine you'd still like to have your technique where you control the razor sharp rose petals?

Subject: Re: Yuki Hana(Finished) Thu Jul 25, 2013 1:45 am

Please.. T_T

Posts : 78 Join date : 2013-07-22

Well then your ability needs to center more around explaining what gives her the ability to do that and less on what it does to her, as that's something you can show through RolePlaying anyway. Before you proceed, take a look at some of the approve applications for an idea on what I mean when I ask you to describe what her ability is.

If you give me a Skype, I can work with you in IM to get something fleshed out

Subject: Re: Yuki Hana(Finished) Thu Jul 25, 2013 2:21 am

Edited.

Posts : 78 Join date : 2013-07-22

Once more, I'm going to direct you to some of the approved applications to see how to word and structure your ability.

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